The Great Big Review and Testing Guide Second Pass 
So by now you will have read
‘So, by now…’ (?)
pretty much anything that we have (or will have) on our site, can pop up.
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You know what, perhaps someone else can do the commas. I find them confusing.
Moving on…
The screenshots haven’t stuck.
Anything from the tester list can be added, as this is what we need reviews on. We will not send anything else that is on your wish list so please keep it up to date with the tester items only.
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If you have been lucky enough to review as a tester we then have the next step… Secret testers!
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We will sometimes need to grab feedback or obtain reviews on an item that is not yet showing on the website. These are secret testers. Typically these are items that are in development, we are considering stocking or a brand ‘spanking’ new range coming in and we want to know what you think ASAP!
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It is like a step process:
*Post reviews to get noticed and to show interest in being a tester with your tester list.
*Potential to review items from the tester list.
*Then we may select you as a secret tester to send items that have not yet launched or are still in development.
Should these be bullet points?
ETA: I spotted another. @Lovehoney_Brenna
Please be patient not everyone can be selected sadly as we do have thousands of…
‘Please be patient. Not everyone can be selected sadly as we do have thousands of…’