Looking for test readers for an erotic short story

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Hi all,

First time post for us on the forums but lurk quite a bit and love reading. My OH has written an erotic short story and I wondered if there were any people who would like a copy and to give some feedback?

I think it's quite good but then I am biased ;-)

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I think you'll have lots of people interested but you won't be able to send a hard copy, so if you have a link to a blog or something you could post a link to that?

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Post a link and I'll give it a read!

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Subdom27 wrote:

Post a link and I'll give it a read!

Me too :)

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Me too

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-raises hand- And me :D

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We all would love to unless you got link to blog, social media etc i ca t seehow this is gona work

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You could add a link on your profile....

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I think this might work...

https://goo.gl/2Fy5pR > It takes you to a short PDF hosted online.

Thank you all :-)

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https://infotomb.com/b83jf

Sorry all - this is the correct link.

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Link doesn't work SFTM

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This one should -

https://infotomb.com/b83jf

Thanks SassyK

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I can't get that link to work either

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Managed to read it, I liked it, I felt there was to much detail on the weather n started slow I wish they had proper names but I wanted more steamy sex than the dates of their next meeting :) I wanted more ... well done to your oh x

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It was just a prototype to see if the writing was good enough to hold an interest. He has some other shorts and the start of a longer novel but I wondered what other people thought of the overall writing style.

I am T by the way :-)

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Hiya,

Just to let you know we have this thread

http://www.lovehoney.co.uk/community/forums/off-topic/966688-lovehoney-erotic-fiction-writers/

Any memeber who have links to their own erotic writing can post links here, so if he writes and more this is a great thread to share it on :) Good luck to her

x