higher as she began
to slowly remove her
blouse. Her Breasts heaving
up and down as
he gently kissed her
Marlin wrote:
he gently kissed her
he must have a long neck she is on the other side of a river bank LOL
hair and neck moving
(LOL)
in unison with the
erotic movement of her
Strokes. Her hearbeat pounding
His hand gently moves....
lower and lower untill
he feels moist, wet
lips, soft and swollen
.He bites gently on
his mars bar then
what's left, places it
on to the nearest
into his stretched anus
(What I love about this: the plotholes; the fact he's still talking to himself [technically], and the complete randomness of this - also, if he stopped speaking at a particulat point, then we switched from third to first and back to third person)
leaving it to melt