Ecksvie wrote:
You have all been a great help so far, I'm definitely beginning to find it easier to put into words.
This topic comes up in my story when the guy tells the girl (who's fretting over her clothes) that she'd look fantastic even if she wore a bin bag, which then leads on to other shiny materials. I think I'm going to talk about the touch element of sex in this. He could get her to define sex, but her opinion of that is purely intercourse, without foreplay etc. I may or may not be able to think of something to do with visuals as well :P
I thought it would be obvious I was talking about sexy clothing given the type of forums I'm asking this on lol. Leggings was just an example, it was the first thing that came to mind. It could be any PVC item next to an identical item of clothing made from a different fabric.
I'm delighted you're being helped and are finding your task easier, that's great news. :)
As for obvious, well, all kinds of sex toys are made from both leather and PVC, I have dildos and a vibrator made from PVC, floggers and other spanky toys made from leather, my strap-on harness is leather, plus there are such things as PVC sheets and leather bags and stuff, so I didn't think it was obvious you were talking about clothes in particular. Still, that's all sorted out now, so never mind. :)
One thing I find helps me to write is to ask myself the questions I would want to know if somebody else was telling me what I was writing about. That way I can help ensure that I don't leave out anything important. :)
For visuals you can use things that appear good because of good associations, for example, if you like pizza, then a pizza can look good, if you like shiny things, then shiny things can look good, and so on. She might think desserts look good, or a new haircut. :)